Unit 19 Learning Aim C: Script

 

I was given 3 feedback which helped improve my final script. it made my aware of my many mistakes such as impractical use of 3 act and my overall narrative. I have given a narrative towards the entity and some reasoning towards the the entity is following the main character. I have improved the dialogue to make it seem more believable and have tried improving my 3 act dialogue

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  1. Ruben10 February 2022 at 06:02

    This was my first resubmission for this assignment. i have added my finals script and my feedback forms

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